March 15, 2006

  • THE HEAT OF YOU

    Oh-so-gently

    exploring...

    Seeking,

        probing,
    licking,

            luring,
    drawing
        out...

    Seducing...

                

    suc{gasp}ceeding.

    Melting...
           me

    © drc 2006

Comments (2)

  • So very much said in so very few words.   Marvelous !

  • You enjoy melting? Aren't you kinda like a puddle when that happens? This is a woman's poem, and I can't identify with it. I DO like to be seduced, I just don't like... melting. This seems very romantic on the surface but it suggests all sorts of negative possibilities. A very thought-provoking piece.

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