So very much said in so very few words. Marvelous !
You enjoy melting? Aren't you kinda like a puddle when that happens? This is a woman's poem, and I can't identify with it. I DO like to be seduced, I just don't like... melting. This seems very romantic on the surface but it suggests all sorts of negative possibilities. A very thought-provoking piece.
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So very much said in so very few words. Marvelous !
You enjoy melting? Aren't you kinda like a puddle when that happens? This is a woman's poem, and I can't identify with it. I DO like to be seduced, I just don't like... melting. This seems very romantic on the surface but it suggests all sorts of negative possibilities. A very thought-provoking piece.
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