February 1, 2006
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Kween_of_the_Queens
Writing Challenge
"A Moment in Time"There are tiny specks of memories that loom larger-than-life and
forever remain a piece of the makeup of who you are. I have been
fortunate. So many of those specks of memories have spun into
threads and woven themselves together into a gorgeous tapestry in my
life. It is difficult to concentrate on just one part of a thread
and not the whole interactive weave, but here's my attempt:
When I was in high school (back in the 70s) we built our house out in
the countryside north of Quito, Ecuador. We moved in before the
roof was complete or the windows framed or installed. I would
climb into bed at night, cuddling up under a pile of quilts. I
could feel the breeze wafting through the four windows of my bedroom,
and thousands of stars twinkled down from the heavens. Cayambe,
the snowcap in the distance, glowed purple-white reflecting the
moon. It was like camping in my own bed. Every night felt like Christmas eve does to a child awaiting
Santa Claus.
In the morning, I would awaken to the birds chirping (or even flying
through my room). Dew sparkled on the leaves of the eucalyptus trees
and I could smell the freshness of the earth waking up with the touch
of the sun. The skies turned from black to smoky purple with
slashes of brilliant oranges and golds, and Cayambe would change from a
black silhouette to appearing to be covered with peach icing.With the chill still hanging in the air, I would make a steaming cup of
tea (grown in the foothills of a jungle volcano) and put Beethoven's
Pastorale on the stereo in my room. I would sit in a hammock on
the upstairs porch, sipping tea, and listening to
Beethoven. Little by little the sun would brighten the sky,
bringing with it a gradually louder cacophony of nature sounds and
smells. Eventually, people sounds would indicate the day had
officially begun, and I would have to let go of participating in the
moment, but it was lovely to carry the memory with me throughout the
day.What am I saying, throughout the day...?
I carry it with me still, and it still calms my soul.© drc

Comments (7)
how beautiful!
wow..that was very good
M'Lady
Now that is one fine memory and very aptly written! thank you so much for sharing it with us! I'm linking your site on the entry for the other links!~Kween
Your vivid description allowed me a glimpse of that wonderful moment that was so special to you....thank you for sharing it...beautifully done!
What a wonderful moment in time, beautifully written. Thank you for sharing.
Wonderful moment in time! What a vivid picture! Thank you for sharing that with all of us!
Courtney
A very beautiful word picture. Thank you for sharing it.
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